A study
of the key decisions made and processes adopted in the creation of the
hypertext edition of "The Vagina Monologues" by Eve Ensler.[1]
In choosing Eve Ensler's The
Vagina Monologues
for my exploration of the effect of hypertext on reading experiences, I aim to
show that the web allows one to deliver a work in a way that lies somewhere
between a printed text and a theatrical performance. This work is highly apt as
it consists of various monologues, all in different voices, but all tackling a
common theme--women's attitudes towards their vaginas. Ensler conducted
numerous interviews with women in order to write the work, resulting in some of
the monologues being "close to verbatim interviews"[2]
and some more elaborate presentations of the resulting material. The monologues
are clearly all part of a collective work, but all have enough of their own
character to be divided from one another and re-ordered. When the work is
performed on stage, the order of the monologues varies. While they appear in a
certain order in the published book, there is no correct or required order in
which they must be read. There is certainly no narrative thread running through
all of them. Instead they are linked by common thoughts and recurring ideas,
further making the work appropriate for a hypertext presentation. Hypertext
allows for different techniques to be used in presenting texts which themselves were
created using different writing techniques. So the variety of voices and the variety of
styles of writing used in the work, allow for variety of presentational
techniques, all in an effort to reproduce something of the immediacy and pace
of a theatrical or oral performance.
The world wide web only became a
reality as recently as 1992[3],
when few could have predicted that URLs would one day be painted on the sides
of buses, or printed on business cards, or that we would see several references
a day to the Internet all around us, both in our homes and beyond. But the
essential structures behind the web are older than any can estimate: it is a
technological realisation of an inherently human structuring system. This fact
might go some way to explaining its pervasiveness. At the core of the web lies
hypertext mark-up language, or HTML. As George P Landow has emphasised, the
concept of hypertext has existed itself in some senses since the beginning of
human thought, with many pre-web texts providing examples of what he calls
proto-hypertext[4]. The true
strength of hypertext is its mirroring of human thought patterns: rather than
sorting information in an arbitrary way (alphabetically, for example), it
allows for linked pieces of data to present themselves at the relevant moments
in a reading. The information is sorted logically, and as Janet Fiderio
explains it, "hypertext products mimic the brain's ability to store and
retrieve information by referential links for quick and intuitive access."[5]
Vannevar Bush is often
credited with being the first to detail a working model of hypertext when he
detailed his vision of the Memex[6],
but as Landow points out, footnotes and endnotes, among other features of
printed publication, were precursors of the Internet link, in that they lead to
tangential thoughts or notes which arise from the reading of what Barthes terms
the original "lexia"[7]
being read. Of course, each of these sub-lexia, being a text in its own right,
has the potential to spawn yet more tangential links, and thus a web of links
is born, which extends in every possible direction. Hypertext allows the
associative linking of nodes without the complication of spatial limitations:
because the nodes are not physically recorded on paper, their extent is not
limited by space on a page, in a book, or even on a shelf. Clearly the idea of
inter-textual linking is not new--Michel Foucault explains that the
"frontiers of a book are never clear-cut... [because] it is caught up in a
system of references to other books, other texts, other sentences: it is a node
within a network... [a] network of references"[8]--but
the capability of hypertext to deal with such inter-textual linking is unique.
The first person to
use the phrase "hypertext" was Ted Nelson, who defines it as,
non-sequential writing--text that
branches and allows choices to the reader, best read at an interactive screen.
As popularly conceived, this is a series of text chunks connected by links
which offer the reader different pathways.[9]
The most obvious feature of a hypertext which creates a
different reading experience from that associated with a traditional book, is
therefore achieved by the use of hyperlinks. Links can be confusing or
frustrating in factual or purely informative websites, especially if there are
too many of them and they are presented in no obvious pattern. Without full
indication of where in the website the reader is at any given moment, and an
indication of how they can get back to where they have been, they will often
feel as if they have missed out sections. Conversely, in hypertext novels or
purely creative websites (and also in certain types of factual sites) the
effect produced by following links and 'losing' one's way, is one of liberation
rather than frustration. In this way, the control over the reading experience
is partially ceded to the reader, as it is he or she who decides where to go
next, and what to include or exclude from their experience of the work. The
links should never be confusing. Instead, the intention is to present a
multitude of options, and not to present one set route through the various
nodes making up the hypertext edition of the literary work. This does of course
mean that certain readings (that is, certain paths through the texts) will be
more rewarding than others, but it is a further challenge for authors and
programmers to ensure that as many of the readings as possible are fulfilling,
or that there is good reason for any unsettling feelings caused by a particular
reading.
Linking
between the individual vagina monologues therefore had to be carefully
considered. Jakob Nielsen suggests that "deep linking is good",
explaining that "a website is like a house with a million entrances: the
front door is simply one among many ways to get in. A good website will
accommodate visitors who choose alternate routes."[10]
Some deep links do exist on the website, allowing the reader to plunge directly
into the story, almost bypassing the introduction, which is nearly always read
at the opening of the stage productions of the work, and which appears at the
start of the printed edition. But while Nielsen's assertion is true when
applied to many websites, it is possible that the sensitive subject matter of The
Vagina Monologues
might offend some readers were they first to be confronted with a text such as
"Reclaiming Cunt" or "The Woman Who Loved to Make Vaginas
Happy". Accordingly, I felt it was important to force a 'front door' entry
to the site, before allowing the reader to access the deep links, which are
eventually offered. This is the reason for the animated opening sequence, made
using separate HTML pages, each with a timed redirect to the next. After
entering the main site, the opening words of the introduction are revealed line
by line, with the previous line of text turning grey as the next appears. This
at once seizes the attention and eases the possible apprehension present in the
reader's mind. A similar technique is used to present the section "If Your
Vagina Could Get Dressed", which is made up of various women's answers to
the same question. In order to hold the attention of the reader, and also to
emphasise their variety, they are flashed up one at a time on the screen. At
any time the user can leave the sequence by clicking on the shoe-links.
Structurally, the site
then follows certain basic principles. The division of the text into individual
nodes was fairly simple: the overall work is made up of smaller texts, and each
qualifies as a node, being spoken by a different character, and centring around
a different idea or theme. These sub-divisions then divide further into three
main categories of texts: there are longer monologues or character pieces,
"Vagina Facts" taken from other works and giving factual information,
and compilations of answers to one particular question asked to all the
interviewed parties.[11]
The introduction, which is written somewhat generally and irreverently, seems
to be designed as if to introduce a potentially un-easy audience to the style
of the entire work. So in the same way that the monologues are all slightly
different from each other (and would be read by a different actress on stage),
the introduction itself is written for three voices, and has the occasional
caveat included, suggesting the manner and varied approach of the whole work.
This allowed the introduction to be broken up into several smaller nodes, which
in turn allows some readers to chose a gentler path into the site, while others
might bypass sections and launch into the monologues themselves.
From each node there
is then at least one link out to another thematically connected node, via a
specific key word. For example, the themes of rape, violence, and guns prompt
the link between "The Little Coochie Snorcher That Could" and
"My Vagina Was My Village", while the theme of discovering unexpected
genital pleasure leads from "Coochie Snorcher" to "The Woman Who
Loved to Make Vaginas Happy". This example illustrates how the same node
can lead to two very different destinations and drastically alter one's reading
experience. To prevent the site from becoming too confusing, and to prevent any
'loops' where links feed round in circles bringing the user to the same nodes
more than once, there are generally no more than three or four possible links
on each page (and sometimes only one). The only 'dead ends' are the
"Vagina Facts", which are incidental to the rest of the texts, and
therefore have been set to open in user-closable pop-up windows (creating
another reading experience impossible in books).
In order that there is
never a dead end in the website, and to ensure that the reader has maximum
choice over where in the text he or she is going, there is always the option to
use the links at the bottom of the window, each calling up a different long
monologue in the main frame. These links are accessed by clicking on the
pictures of women's shoes--an idea borrowed from the stage production, where
shoes are lined up along the front of the stage, and are individually lit when
the character they represent is being portrayed on stage. All the monologues
are accessible in this way, except for "My Vagina Was My Village",
which owing to its more serious tone has been made accessible only via a
carefully mapped route through the nodes which prepare the reader for its
subject matter. The shoe navigation frame provides an ever-present graphical
interface, allowing the reader a more abstract way to access the texts. All the
graphics used are small and allow for short download times, encouraging readers
not to lose interest.[12]
Typographically,
the web has its limitations. Where a print publisher can dictate the font,
size, and layout of a text, the web designer is limited by the constraints of
each individual reader's computer configuration. But the web does allow a
different kind of control over layout, which traditional books cannot
replicate. This control is achieved through the insertion of line-breaks at
logical moments in the text. As discussed earlier, the individual monologues
are obviously separate in many ways, but the very internal composition of each
individual monologue also works in a logical and layered way. When performed on
stage, the monologues are punctuated by silences, pauses, and facial or bodily
expressions on the part of the actors, as is true of all performative
literature. The monologues are deliberately 'chatty' in style, with some even
containing deliberate references to the fact that they are based on interviews:
"The Flood" contains direct reactions to the interviewer's questions,
despite the questions not being included. The effect is like watching a
television interview, where the interviewer cannot be heard, but where the
answers given by the subject hint at what was asked:
I mean...
well, never mind. No. Never mind. I can't talk to you about this. What's a
smart girl like you going around talking to old ladies about their down-theres
for? We didn't do this kind of a thing when I was a girl. What? Jesus, O.K. [13]
On stage, the actors' delivery can convey to the audience
the sense that the monologues are unprepared reactions to questions. Web design
enables us to create a reading experience which is close to this performative
experience by almost forcing the reader to change pace, and assume an internal
oral presentation of the text by adopting features of 'speech' found in
chat-rooms, and in most people's every-day email-writing style. By adopting
these linguistic patterns, which sit somewhere between those of speech and
written text, the hypertext literary work has the capacity to assume a more
aural pace, whilst remaining entirely written. Designer and writer Rob Wittig
explains the theory thus:
white space is the web writer's
friend. [I am] utterly unafraid of asking a reader to scroll... in contrast to
the conventional Good Web Advice to cram everything onto a single, unscrolling
page... It's a timing thing, the eye tracking on an angle, back and fro on the
surface. It's both faster and slower.[14]
One of the aims of my
website was to impose this quasi-aural reading method by using line-breaks at
logical moments in the texts, to suggest a specific pace of reading. By
breaking up large pages of text into longer but more colloquially laid-out
texts, the reading experience is changed, making it faster and more direct.
Similarly, increased text sizes and bold type help to imply volume or
aggression in delivery, as they scroll into view. So, for example, in order to
draw the audience further into the work, in the stage production of
"Reclaiming Cunt" the actress reading encourages the audience to
chant the closing words in unison with her. A similar deepening of audience
involvement is achieved on the website by making the text progressively bigger
and bolder.
Three prose texts remain unaltered in terms of
line-breaks: "Coochie Snorcher" is in its original form so as to
reflect the report-like, childish tone in which it is written, and to emphasise
its confessional qualities. It is presented like a series of diary entries,
broken up only by the headings already present in the text. "My Angry
Vagina" and "The Vagina Workshop" have also been left with their
original line-breaks to reflect their more cohesive, planned, styles of
writing: they read much less like one side of an interview than some of the
other monologues, with very few if any interventions taking place from the
imagined interviewer. They are essentially stories told directly to the
audience.
The oral dimension of
"Because He Liked to Look At It" is twofold: where all the monologues
are by nature spoken pieces by one character, this one relies heavily on a fast
moving reported conversation between the woman speaking, and Bob, the man she
describes. On the website, in order to force a fast-paced reading of the
dialogue section, the two characters have each been given their own column in
an HTML table (which is otherwise invisibly integrated into the layout of the
body of the text). Bob's words are presented in the right hand column, left
aligned, and the speaker's words are in the left hand column, right aligned.
This creates an immediate sense of dialogue by encouraging faster reading
whilst clearly dividing the two speakers on to either side of an imagined line.
The quotation marks surrounding the direct speech have been stripped away, as
these are merely intended to indicate who is speaking when, and are no longer
needed (in fact they would impede the flow of reading). The characters are
clearly separated by their position on different sides of the line, but are
clearly shown to be interacting as the conversation snakes across from one
column to the other. Phrasing such as "he said" and "she
said", have been left in to re-emphasise the fact that the entire text is
still a reported conversation--a monologue delivered by one character.
A
hypertext edition does more than merely break up a text into smaller pieces and
link them together. Using all the possible features of the web, a truly unique
reading can be created to suit the particular nuances and flavours of a text.
These features include careful and strategically planned links, but also extend
into the realm of typographical design, including dynamic textual effects and
the use of HTML tables and other layout features to make a different visual
impact. Such treatment of text makes for a more dramatic presentation--almost a
performance--and in turn encourages deeper reading by varying the reading speed
and style to suit the material being read. At the same time, the linking
together of nodes in a non-linear but logical and lateral manner can liberate
readers, allowing them greater control over the entire reading experience, and
reflecting the way in which the human mind itself gathers and catalogues
information.
This
essay is © 2002 Jonathan Sacerdoti
BIBLIOGRAPHY
BOOKS
PRIMARY:
Eve Ensler, The Vagina
Monologues (London:
Virago, 2001)
SECONDARY:
W. Chernaik, C. Davis, and M. Deegan (eds.), The Politics of
the Electronic Text, (Oxford: OHC Publications, 1993)
W. Chernaik, M. Deegan, and A. Gibson. (eds.), Beyond the Book:
Theory, Culture, and the Politics of Cyberspace, (Oxford: OHC
Publications, 1996)
Foucault, Michel, The Archaeology of Knowledge
and the Discourse on Language. Translated by A. M. Sheridan Smith.
(New York: Harper
& Row, 1976)
Landow,
George P., Hypertext:
The Convergence of Contemporary Critical Theory and Technology (Baltimore: Hopkins UP, 1992)
JOURNALS AND ARTICLES
Fiderio,
Janet. "A Grand Vision" in Byte (October, 1988) page 237+
ONLINE
World-Wide
Web Proposal for a Hypertext Project, CERN, 1990
http://www.w3.org/hypertext/WWW/Proposal.html
by Berners-Lee, T., and Caulliau, R.
Hypertext
Now
http://www.eastgate.com/HypertextNow/
By Bernstein, Mark
alt.hypertext
Frequently Asked Questions
http://www.csd.uwo.ca/~jamie/hypertext-faq.html
Compiled and edited by Blustein, Jamie
As We May Think (originally
published in the July 1945 issue of The Atlantic Monthly)
http://www.isg.sfu.ca/~duchier/misc/vbush/
by Bush, Vannevar
Politexts,
Hypertexts, and Other Cultural Formations in the Late Age of Print
http://www.ibiblio.org/cmc/mag/1995/mar/kaplan.html
by Kaplan, Nancy
useit.com: usable information technology,
http://www.useit.com/
Created and written by Nielsen, Jakob
Hypertext
Places
http://cheiron.mcmaster.ca/~htp/
Created by Rockwell, Geoffrey
Hypertext
Criticism: introduction to a special issue
http://jodi.ecs.soton.ac.uk/Articles/v01/i07/editorial/
by Tosca, Susana P.
A Little History of the World Wide Web
http://www.w3.org/History.html
[1] This essay originally accompanied
the hypertext edition of "The Vagina Monologues" as part of the work
for assessment in the E-Literature paper on my English undergraduate degree
course at Oxford University. The theme answered on was to create "an
illustration of how the web can be used to create a reading experience that
would not be possible in a conventional book. [You are at liberty to use a
literary text you have already studied or to write your own.]".
[2] Eve
Ensler, The Vagina Monologues (London: Virago, 2001) page 7
[3] A
Little History of the World Wide Web, http://www.w3.org/History.html
[4] Landow,
George P., Hypertext: The Convergence of Contemporary Critical Theory and
Technology
(Baltimore: Hopkins UP, 1992) page 37
[5] Fiderio,
Janet. "A Grand Vision" in Byte (October, 1988) page 237
[6] Bush,
Vannevar, As We May Think (originally published in the July 1945 issue of The Atlantic
Monthly)
http://www.isg.sfu.ca/~duchier/misc/vbush/
[7] Barthes,
quoted in Landow, Hypertext, page 3
[8] Foucault,
Michel, The Archaeology of Knowledge and the Discourse on Language, Translated by A. M. Sheridan
Smith (New York: Harper & Row, 1976) Page 23
[9] Nelson,
Theodore Holm Literary Machines, (Self-published, 1981)
[10] Nielsen,
Jakob, "Alert Box: Deep Linking is Good"
http://www.useit.com/alertbox/20020303.html
[11] Only
one of these, "if your vagina could get dressed, what would it wear?",
has been included on the website to keep it a manageable size.
[12] Nielsen,
Jakob, "Response Times: The Three Important Limits" http://www.useit.com/papers/responsetime.html
[13] Ensler, The Vagina Monologues, page 26
[14] Rob Wittig, quoted in "scrolling
with Rob Wittig" by Diane Greco in "Hypertext Now",
http://www.eastgate.com/HypertextNow/archives/Wittig.html